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Hi all,

Please critique my site. It's not ready yet, but I need some feedback.

Thanks
 
Posts: 36 | Registered: January 18, 2009Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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The "links" link is not working on the "my foundation" page, but works on the other pages (that you have so far).

While reading your bio, I see you are only 6 inches tall. Must be hard to buy clothes, huh?
 
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LOL! Thanks Larryd. I'll fix it.
 
Posts: 36 | Registered: January 18, 2009Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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As a newbie I apologise for any bumbling that might offend up front. I mean only to provide a perspective.
- Basically I like the site overall in terms of layout & easy to move around. Bearing this in mind:
- Links to other sites didn't return me to your site when I close them. Perhaps clicking on the "windows" button might help?
- Sponsors page doesn't refer to you or comment on you. Since I don't know you there is no 'outside' credibility on the website of who you really are or what you stand for.
- Since your website relates to activities or sporting events 'pop up' montages of sporting moment highlights, perhaps pushing toward video clips in "About Emma" could increase interactivity for a website visitor.
- Not sure what a fist and "ff" represent as a logo. Fistfuls of historic significance vis social/civil rights? There's a few ffs and other letters in moments as I struggle with my webdesign problems.
- Similarly the Emma Kensington Foundation is a blog page rather than reflecting support from other sources (in or outside of Africa) or reflecting the culmination of developing community services (such as mentoring)in local communities.
- The reason for emphasising interwebsite linkages is that I'm aware that other websites "pointing' to your website is a means of helping in search engine optimisation (SEO)once your ready to go 'live'.
Trust some of this is helpful.
Byways
 
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