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Hello all!
recently published my new site www.fortune80.com and was hoping i could get some feedback and constructive criticism. There are a couple of broken links at the moment as i havent 100% finished eg. terminology, links and sitemap but they will soon be rectified.

Any feedback/criticism/advice would be greatly appreciated...

Thank you all!
 
Posts: 8 | Registered: February 06, 2009Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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Hi bluffinbilly,
Overall, a job well done. Here are some aspects I would take into consideration;
1. You use two different background images. Most of the pages have one but 'Free Bankrolls' and 'Guarantees' have another one. IMHO it's more consistent to use the same background image on all pages unless there is a reason to use a different one and I don't see one here.
2. 'Contact us' text on that button spreads over two rows. I would change that to only one row.
3. The ads (I assume they are ads) on the right hand side feel a little bit out of place from the layout point of view.
4. I am somewhat confused over the content on the 'Contact us' page. The boxes containing links don't seem to have much with contact information to do, so maybe placing them on another page with the explenation what they provide would be a better solution.
Those points represent only my opinion. Hope that helps and keep up the good work.
 
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Kilmt,
thanks for the feedback. will definately look to improve on what u have pointed out. Also, could i ask your opinion on which background you prefer? i was going more for a clean, somewhat professional look.

Thanks again!
 
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In that case my preference would be the one you use on 'Home' page.
 
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thanks again!
 
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Hi bluffinbilly..

Ok, I'm no expert but this is what I think could be improved...

The green on the bankrolls page too harsh, try and make a little darker so it has roughly the same contrast as the orange & the blue on the same page which looks good to me.

Fix up your top heading which is resizing from page to page..and the position of your page is shifting from page to page (if you know what I mean)...it's distracting.

The grey background on the top of the pages is a little too dark..try and lighten a little.

Good luck with your site!
 
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