Hey all, I just finished a new intro for my videos and wanted to see if I could get some opinions from you- good, bad, ugly- just looking for feedback. Here is the link:

http://www.jrazzcreations.com/Intro

There are 2- one is my old one and one is the new. If you feel like watching them and giving me some feedback, I would appreciate it.

Thanks,

j razz
www.jrazzcreations.com

Hello, j razz
You just leaved me speachless.If i wosn't married already, just after watching those intros i'll be running to my actual wife and propose again.
Where did you find the music? Sounds like Kitaro.It's awesome for your site and blends perfectly with your theme.
I like better the first version "intro.wmv".The characters for the main text(Byford family memories) are better then in the second intro but they can also be improved.Something is not right, maybe the font or maybe the size, maybe me .In this form you have two font families and four sizes, all in a medium size space.Maybe it will look better if you stick to just three font sizes.
The second intro, on the other hand,is a little less longer - that is always a good thing.
Overall, verry impressive.From the first moment i visited your page i knew you're a gifted and sensitive person,just by looking at the bride.
And, a little advice: when you are bored and have nothing to do, try and make the flowers of the bride red, or add one element in your page with a verry warm color(like red). To add tension to a monochromatic picture there are two ways to do it, either by oposing power guide lines(like this \\\\\\\ /) or by creating a point of interrest with contrasting colors, something to anchor the eyes of the viewer. The reason i'm seying this is because, make no mistake, your intro is not a web page, better, it is a painting.
Please excuse my language, i'm not a native english speaker, i learned'it by watching movies.
Also, no hard feelings, right?
Your sincerely,
misumisu